Thursday, September 29, 2011

Leia's Very First Essay

The Question: Write a paragraph about the Mississippi River. Describe where the Mississippi River flows. Then tell why the river is so important.

Leia's A+ Answer: The Mississippi River flows south for more than 2000 miles and is yousd ["used"] as a majir ["major"] shipping rout. The Mississippi river flows into the golf ["Gulf"] of Mexico.

1 comment:

  1. If she has any real interest in the Mississippi, she (and you) may enjoy some of the Old Man River project a young man from Burlington filmed of his adventure on the river.
    Background info: http://www.brettonthewater.com/expeditions.php?e=2
    His full feature film in 10 segments: http://vimeo.com/brettonthewater/videos

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